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Re: Chapter 2. Location: Helfire
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Sun, 20 May 2001 16:25:33 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Wilson Raska writes:
> Hey Shiri, cool story! You did a great job in introducing us to several new
> characters and I got a better feel for what was going on in Helfire.
I'm glad you did! I think that was my main point - to give a little more
info, background, fill you in on the details. Someday I hope to put all my
chapters in a totally stand-alone format, with no structure or character
descriptions or anything. Maybe, if it's good enough, I'd publish it - but
most likely I'll just print out a couple of copies to "have around the
house" and show to friends, etc.
> Emmy's
> house was pretty cool too,
The house is half Chris's building, I only stuck a few bricks around the
facade wall he built (to take pictures of his characters, last month). As a
matter of fact, the place doesn't even have a door! (Yet.) I'll probably
remedy that sometime.
> I liked the way the slopes gradually, well,
> sloped up toward the house. And you made it look natural too, which is
> pretty hard to do.
Thanks!
> I'll agree with Joel that you do have a lot of
> cliffhangers (you'd think one or two of them would fall off the cliff
> though, don't you think?) Oh God, I'm sorry, that was the worst pun of all
> time. You can ban me from lugnet.castle now. Whoah, where was I? Oh yeah,
> I really like the cliffhangers though, keeps me interested in what's to come.
ROFLMAO! Nah, I'll pass banning you, although I'm glad you liked it!
-Shiri
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