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In lugnet.castle, Shiri Dori writes:
> What more can I say?
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> http://www.geocities.com/shiri_writing/chapter2.html
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> Comments and feedback extremely welcome!!
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> -Shiri "the Dutchess" Dori
Wow. Even though I saw the pics, and read the story, when it's all put
together, it has a certain...something...about it. Very well done, Shiri.
Truly amazing. Even I can't wait for Chapter 3! :-)
-Chris
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In lugnet.castle, Shiri Dori writes:
> What more can I say?
>
> http://www.geocities.com/shiri_writing/chapter2.html
>
> Comments and feedback extremely welcome!!
>
> -Shiri "the Dutchess" Dori
Hey! What's with the cliffs and the hanging and all that?? That's not fair..! ;)
Good work, Shiri!
Joel J
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Chris Maddison writes:
> In lugnet.castle, Shiri Dori writes:
> > What more can I say?
> >
> > http://www.geocities.com/shiri_writing/chapter2.html
> >
> > Comments and feedback extremely welcome!!
> >
> > -Shiri "the Dutchess" Dori
>
> Wow. Even though I saw the pics, and read the story, when it's all put
> together, it has a certain...something...about it. Very well done, Shiri.
> Truly amazing. Even I can't wait for Chapter 3! :-)
>
> -Chris
Well, even though you're incredibly biased on this one ;), I'll forgive you
since the story is really good. Another winner Shiri.
--Anthony
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Hey Shiri, cool story! You did a great job in introducing us to several new
characters and I got a better feel for what was going on in Helfire. Emmy's
house was pretty cool too, I liked the way the slopes gradually, well,
sloped up toward the house. And you made it look natural too, which is
pretty hard to do. I'll agree with Joel that you do have a lot of
cliffhangers (you'd think one or two of them would fall off the cliff
though, don't you think?) Oh God, I'm sorry, that was the worst pun of all
time. You can ban me from lugnet.castle now. Whoah, where was I? Oh yeah,
I really like the cliffhangers though, keeps me interested in what's to come.
Awesome Job!
Wilson
In lugnet.castle, Shiri Dori writes:
> What more can I say?
>
> http://www.geocities.com/shiri_writing/chapter2.html
>
> Comments and feedback extremely welcome!!
>
> -Shiri "the Dutchess" Dori
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Wilson Raska writes:
> Hey Shiri, cool story! You did a great job in introducing us to several new
> characters and I got a better feel for what was going on in Helfire.
I'm glad you did! I think that was my main point - to give a little more
info, background, fill you in on the details. Someday I hope to put all my
chapters in a totally stand-alone format, with no structure or character
descriptions or anything. Maybe, if it's good enough, I'd publish it - but
most likely I'll just print out a couple of copies to "have around the
house" and show to friends, etc.
> Emmy's
> house was pretty cool too,
The house is half Chris's building, I only stuck a few bricks around the
facade wall he built (to take pictures of his characters, last month). As a
matter of fact, the place doesn't even have a door! (Yet.) I'll probably
remedy that sometime.
> I liked the way the slopes gradually, well,
> sloped up toward the house. And you made it look natural too, which is
> pretty hard to do.
Thanks!
> I'll agree with Joel that you do have a lot of
> cliffhangers (you'd think one or two of them would fall off the cliff
> though, don't you think?) Oh God, I'm sorry, that was the worst pun of all
> time. You can ban me from lugnet.castle now. Whoah, where was I? Oh yeah,
> I really like the cliffhangers though, keeps me interested in what's to come.
ROFLMAO! Nah, I'll pass banning you, although I'm glad you liked it!
-Shiri
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