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Re: Chapter 2. Location: Helfire
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Fri, 18 May 2001 22:54:38 GMT
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Hey Shiri, cool story! You did a great job in introducing us to several new
characters and I got a better feel for what was going on in Helfire. Emmy's
house was pretty cool too, I liked the way the slopes gradually, well,
sloped up toward the house. And you made it look natural too, which is
pretty hard to do. I'll agree with Joel that you do have a lot of
cliffhangers (you'd think one or two of them would fall off the cliff
though, don't you think?) Oh God, I'm sorry, that was the worst pun of all
time. You can ban me from lugnet.castle now. Whoah, where was I? Oh yeah,
I really like the cliffhangers though, keeps me interested in what's to come.
Awesome Job!
Wilson
In lugnet.castle, Shiri Dori writes:
> What more can I say?
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> http://www.geocities.com/shiri_writing/chapter2.html
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> Comments and feedback extremely welcome!!
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> -Shiri "the Dutchess" Dori
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| (...) I'm glad you did! I think that was my main point - to give a little more info, background, fill you in on the details. Someday I hope to put all my chapters in a totally stand-alone format, with no structure or character descriptions or (...) (23 years ago, 20-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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