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What more can I say? (URL) and feedback extremely welcome!! -Shiri "the Dutchess" Dori (23 years ago, 18-May-01, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.castle.org.cw) !!
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(...) Wow. Even though I saw the pics, and read the story, when it's all put together, it has a certain...something...about it. Very well done, Shiri. Truly amazing. Even I can't wait for Chapter 3! :-) -Chris (23 years ago, 18-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Hey! What's with the cliffs and the hanging and all that?? That's not fair..! ;) Good work, Shiri! Joel J (23 years ago, 18-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) Well, even though you're incredibly biased on this one ;), I'll forgive you since the story is really good. Another winner Shiri. --Anthony (23 years ago, 18-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Hey Shiri, cool story! You did a great job in introducing us to several new characters and I got a better feel for what was going on in Helfire. Emmy's house was pretty cool too, I liked the way the slopes gradually, well, sloped up toward the (...) (23 years ago, 18-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) I'm glad you did! I think that was my main point - to give a little more info, background, fill you in on the details. Someday I hope to put all my chapters in a totally stand-alone format, with no structure or character descriptions or (...) (23 years ago, 20-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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